The good news: It’s better. The bad news: It’s finished (again), but not perfect.
For those of you who have queried or submitted, when did you know you were actually ready? How do you overcome the self-consciousness and actually click the ‘send’ button? What steps did you take to get there?
I’m going to try three things:
- Search for the words I use too often (i.e. just, like, grinned, shrugged, etc.)
- Search for passive sentences
- Read the whole thing aloud
When I’m done, I’ll let you know how it goes and how much the ms improved.
See ya’ll tomorrow!