Body Language: What Your Characters Aren’t Saying
From Little, Brown Books avail. Jan. 2013 |
Jenn does something incredible in this book that many people might ignore/overlook. She defines her characters with their body language, which is pretty awesome considering her cast consists of four teenage boys and one girl. The characters don’t just shrug and wink and raise their eyebrows. Well…they do, but each character has their own physical and personality quirks that makes them recognizable without a tag.
For instance, there’s a scene where the boys are expecting to be attacked and you get a sense of where each one ranks in the group and how they fight simply by the description of how they stand:
“Sam shook his head again, but Connor missed it. Cas stood a the front of his room, arms crossed over his chest. Nick rolled his head back and forth, the bones in his neck cracking. Trev curled his hands into loose fists.”*
Because you haven’t had the pleasure of reading ALTERED yet, you might not catch that Sam is the leader, that Cas is the super strong (albeit slightly goofy) one, that Nick is the loose cannon/brawler, and that Trev is the carefully-controlled, wise one. But it’s there — that thing that makes each character an individual — in that scene and all of the others.
Jenn’s writing got me thinking about body language, and the ways a writer can use it to the build characters. I found a few good lists of gestures that might be helpful, but I’d like to compile my own, semi-comprehensive list that’s sort of a one-stop shop. Wanna help?
If you have a gesture or body language description to add to the list, please put it in the comments. I’ll post the compilation of all your suggestions next week.
This the format I’m going to use:
Angry
Arms folded across chest (male)
Hands on hips (female)
Jaw tight, clenched
Hands in fists
Bored
Legs crossed, kicking foot (female)
Head rested on hand
Fidgeting
Other categories will include (but feel free to add more!): Aggressive, Concerned, Confident, Defensive, Depressed, Doubtful, Excited, Evaluating, Happy, Indecisive, Insecure, Interested, Nervous, Pained, Relaxed, Sad, Scared, Shocked.
Here are links to other gesture-related articles you may find helpful:
Examples of Body Language
25 Examples of Body Language
Body Language
Examples of Body Language
Thanks! And I look forward to hearing your body language descriptions!
*This quote is taken from the ARC version of the novel and may be different in the final version.
32 Comments
Treskie
Indecisive:
Running a hand through hair.
Concerned:
Rubbing the back of the neck.
🙂
This post got me thinking, now I feel the urge to add more body language into my writing.
God bless
Treskie
Becky Wallace
@Treskie: I know, right? It’s like I’m in a flurry to find the places where my characters body language could be better. Good luck writing!
Madeline Jane
Body language is an awesome alternative to actual dialogue. I’ll have to check out those posts, thanks for sharing. 🙂
Becky Wallace
@Madeline: Sure! I’ll post the compiled list next Wed.
Carrie Butler
Great idea, Becky! 🙂
Angry: Flared nostrils, narrowed eyes, pursed lips, stiff posture, etc.
Jess
Avoidance (of writing in particluar): Pregnant woman shuffling between refrigerator and her computer to check Twitter, blogs, and anything other than her waiting Word document 🙂
Becky Wallace
@Carrie: GREAT!! Thanks for your input.
@Jess: I just snorted water. Thanks for that.
Lexa Cain
I am putting this page in my “Writing Tools” links immediately! Body language is so hard for me. I did 2 revision passes just trying to take out the boring “shrugs” and “frowns” and find fresher things to replace them with. It was such a struggle. Thanks so much for the suggestions and the links! 😀
Becky Wallace
@Lexa: I’m glad it’s helpful. Hopefully the big list will be too…when it’s done!
William Kendall
Body language tends to play into my main characters; he tends to be sarcastic, and I’m always thinking of ways to express that in gestures, whereas she finds him exasperating, and that’s also easily expressed in how she uses body language.
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